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I can smell the typewriters beneath your skin
metallic, halting, smudged vibrato
wavering note stretched out far beyond
the edge of the universe tucked in your front pocket
breathing out in time with your heartbeats.

All along the wall I find notebook pages
old teabags hung for too long, green flakes whirling
while you sit in the lean of the willow tree
and watch the play that is my life
chew the scenery; the stage collapses with a groan.

You pull your scarf in
and wrap the scars in burnt umber
while the show goes on
again.
Hm.
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Pocket Universe by *Shoeborn ( Suggested by GuinevereToGwen and Featured by DorianHarper )
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Flermigan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
Amazing wording throughout this whole piece. Absolutely stunning. :heart:
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Shoeborn Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you very much!
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Flermigan Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
You're welcome, love. 
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Orion159 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very nice! The imagery you use is extremely well done, if a bit tangled and eclectic!

Repeating old points, but still...

Great job!

I am a dummy! 
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Shoeborn Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Danke! Hey, any feedback (polite feedback, that is XD) is good feedback.
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Orion159 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sure thing!
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FScrossTezin Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
pocket universes can be anywhere, anywhere at all
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Shoeborn Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Indeed, if one stops to look.
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FScrossTezin Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
well it's not entirely possible to see them all
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Shoeborn Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student General Artist
na, only so much we can percieve
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