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and she always dismisses herself
and leaves her pupils dilated
lighthouses and forget-me-nots tangled in her chest
but her thoughts shiver more than her dreams.

he calls her beautiful
as she longs to stick his eyes out with stones
and grasp his aching heart between her hands
but they both know he's already broken.

how can they stop when they've never started
she wishes she could send them reeling
with stalwart syllables and poignant sighs
even though she's never made a sound.

the storms outside are  bitter
no sweet rain after dusk to wet her lips
the winds inside her are quiet, and seething
with all the words she's never said

and all the promises she's ever broken.
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saltwaterlungs Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I feel like this is everything I have ever tried to write. It leaves such a sense of longing and, just wow... Thanks for writing!
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Shoeborn Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you so much!
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saltwaterlungs Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem!
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Shoeborn Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Student General Artist
I will certainly do my best! Thank you so much!
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This absolutely wonderful. It really does fill me with an ache and a longing after reading it. And that imagery...it's just great. This is great. :+favlove:
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Shoeborn Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you so much!
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GuinevereToGwen Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student Writer
This is... breathtaking. This deserves much more attention than it gets. :) You should submit it to some lit groups.
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Shoeborn Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you so much! I actually did, to BurdenedHearts, but I'm not part of any other groups.
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